2008. In a
literary work, a minor character, often known as a foil, possesses traits that
emphasize, by contrast or comparison, the distinctive characteristics and qualities
of the main character. For example, the ideas or behavior of a minor character
might be used to highlight the weaknesses or strengths of the main character.
Choose a novel or play in which a minor character serves as a foil for the main
character. Then write an essay in which you analyze how the relation between
the minor character and the major character illuminates the meaning of the
work.
In the well-known Harry Potter series written by J.K. Rowling, the main character, Harry, has two best friends that accompany him in his adventures throughout the books. During these adventures, there are many minor characters, some more important than others, that assist the three on their quests. One of the most important of these minor characters would be that of Neville Longbottom, the foil of Harry Potter.
Neville Longbottom is Harry's foil throughout the books. Even though he doesn't spend as much time with Harry as Ron and Hermione, Harry's best friends, do, he is a memorable character as he is in all of the books and possess the opposite qualities of Harry, further embellishing him into the reader's brain. This is shown when he is first truly met at the quidditch practice Harry goes to. Neville is passive and has no self-confidence, making him an easy target for the bully Draco Malfoy, whereas Harry's bold attitude helps Neville when an object of his is stolen by Draco. The conflicting personalities bring the characters closer together and brings this similarity to the reader's attention.
Neville and Harry share a connection all throughout the books, having many examples in each. Another would be the different things that they excel at. Both are wizards and have the ability to do magic, but just like humans, certain things come easier to different people. Harry is very strong at casting spells whereas Neville excels at herbology. These two make a great team as Harry's physical strength and Neville's mental strength team up and help Harry in competing in the Triwizard Tournament in the book Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. While the story wouldn't be as interesting if the main character was very skilled with plants or potions as he was with magic and spell casting, the differences between the two again shows that they both are important in the story, but their importance is shown through their skills. Magic being more important that plants, Harry is more important but needs Neville to help shape him.
There are the obvious similarities between the two, such as the fact that either of them could have been the one to have the power to defeat the Dark Lord Voldermort, and that both have issues with their parents. This is a big similarity between the two, both being raised for a majority of their lives by someone other than their parents. In doing this, the author could be trying to show how both are strong and hearty by continuing on without their parents but each doing that in his own way. Both excel at subjects despite their upbringing and have a heartiness to them that can only be obtained through their special upbringing.
Neville and Harry are not the same character, but have distinctive qualities that are both similar and different between the two, making Neville Harry's foil. While this is not quite obvious on the surface of the story, if one analyzes this idea, there are many similarities and differences that are connected between the two. Having Neville support Harry all throughout the series without the reader knowing it may have been a scheme by the author to connect two things that are unlike on the surface but when looked at deeper are very similar and supportive to each other.
Although I have read these books so many times, I never thought about Neville being a foil. I liked how each example for Neville being a foil was backed up with examples for the series. The fourth paragraph is the best when it comes to varying sentences lengths. When I was reading this, I noticed that a some of your sentences become lengthy like "While the story wouldn't be as interesting if the main character was very skilled with plants or potions as he was with magic and spell casting, the differences between the two again shows that they both are important in the story, but their importance is shown through their skills". I think you used some great examples to back up your thoughts about Neville being a foil.
ReplyDeleteI definitely like that you came up with this idea. I really liked your opening paragraph and the way you didn't come right out with Neville, but brought up Harry's best friends and other minor characters first. The gradual lead in to the thesis made the paragraph flow better. Throughout the essay, some things I noticed that might need work were your transition sentences. The paragraphs seemed really separate and didn't really lead in to each other. I also agree with Aishwarya on the point of lengthy sentences. Try to be a little more concise. One thing I did like was how you showed that they were different, but also implied that their differences make them similar.
ReplyDeleteI like that you didn't just focus on the similarities between Neville and Harry, you weren't afraid of the more complex differences. Throughout your essay, you have really great examples ,but as your essay progressed your sentences got really long, perhaps too long. At the beginning of paragraph three I felt like the opening sentences could be more concise and flow a little better. Lastly, when you described Harry and Neville as " strong and hearty" perhaps you could use other words like " resilient and ambitious" because hearty and strong have physical connotations that a reader could confuse.
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